Outfit of the Day

YouTube is chock full of teenage girls posting videos of what they are wearing for the day, sort of like an online fashion show.  Of course, this is giving me ideas for a different kind of video (smiles)...how do you think it turned out?  This isn't so much of a story that has a twist than it is an exploration of other ways to tell a story in this genre.  It looks small at first but click the image to expand the panels into a readable size.  

Apologies if the text is grainy in spots.  If it's annoying let me know and I will start from scratch.

As always, the pics are not mine.